Here is our story, good against evil, light against dark. Finding the light is our quest. Light is the life-giver. As diurnal creatures we are attracted to light. We design our paintings and dramas around the quest for the security, benefits and promise of light. Our fundamental stories are quests, from Romeo and Juliet to Tales of Ulysses. They get repeatedly reconstituted throughout time. Similarly, fundamental designs from the history of painting are repeated. They reflect our biology, our questing nature. Light presents itself best when contrasted against darkness. A dark and stormy setting is perfect for magnifying the value of light. We look for and toward the light which is usually best experienced as a shape framed by darkness, the portal of illumination seen from within the cave. In designing a painting, an oculus (circle) of light gets our attention – especially if we have reinforcing shapes (arrows), further directing our attention (see Example 1, diagram).
This design, used in various combinations, has been valuable to artists wishing to create powerful dramas and arresting images. First, consider the circle of light in the field of darkness. In Example 2 is a Rembrandt (the one stolen from the Gardner Museum in Boston). Rembrandt uses the oculus of light in the upper left wrapped round by a dark and stormy sky. He also uses a tilted triangular shape (ship and waves) to unify the light and dark areas. In Example 3, Turner returns to the stormy sky motif with a circle of light, in fact, he offers two circles of light one large and one small containing the sun. Our divided attention helps glue the two sides of the painting together. Turner will use this oculus of light design repeatedly but, usually coupling it to another design form. In Example 4, a watercolor (whose contrast I have exaggerated), you see Turner has now placed the oculus of light on the right side. Example 5 offers a small painting by Daubigny painted 50 years after Turner’s example. It’s the same design.
Example 4. Turner. Here the oculus of light has moved from the left to the right side:

Example 5. Daubigny, like the Turner in Example 3:

Contemporary artists use the oculus of light as well. Example 6 demonstrates Gerhard Richter’s use of this unifying and arresting principle in an abstraction.
Example 6. Richter:

In example one I showed a green circle penetrated by two reverse triangles or wedges. The triangles (wedges) overlap. The overlapping triangle is dominant and appears closer. Examples of this design form reach back to antiquity. Example 7 presents an example of Rembrandt using both the oculus of light and contradicting overlapping wedges to build a strong design in his windmill painting.
Example 7. Rembrandt with graphic overlay:

Example 8. Rembrandt’s Mill without overlay:

The next suite of examples all illustrate the design of contradicting occluding triangles. In these examples I have graphically overlaid colored lines indicating the location of reverse wedge designs. First, with Example 9 , is another small Rembrandt. That is followed by other landscapes and seascapes all using this reverse wedge or contradictory triangle design. Whenever you find the sea and the land meeting in a painting look for this design. It is quite common.
Example 9. Rembrandt with graphic overlay:

Example 10. Rembrandt without graphic overlay:

Example 11. An early Monet with graphic overlay:

Example 12. Hadleigh Castle by the Sea by Constable with graphic overlay.

You can find the undiagrammed bottom leg of the left triangle easily. Trace the line of the ruined wall.
Examples 13 and 14 are without graphic overlays but, at this point they are no longer necessary for you to discover the reverse wedge design. You see how obvious it is.
Example 13. Antoine Guillemet, 1870s:

Example 14. Luigi painting the Loire Valley in the 1870s:

I conclude with a few examples of mine in which I transform the reverse triangle/wedge design. Here, I illustrate how to turn the oculus of light into a triangular wedge shape. And, as you saw in the Richter, Example 6, the oculus need not always be circular but it can be rectangular, like a soft square or rhombus. I also want to illustrate how simplification of the design can increase its emotive power. Example 15 shows a painting with a problem: it has a fractured design in the sky. The layering does not cohere. There is no central oculus. There is no wedge of light. There is only a slight serpentine pattern of light leading the viewer back into space near the horizon.
Example 15.

Example 16 is another painting which uses both the reversing triangle principle and a large geometric shape of light.
Example 16.

Example 17 demonstrates how I borrow the light shape (cloud) from the painting above in Example 16 and introduce it to the painting in Example 15. I now have simplified the sky design. The wedge of light on the horizon is more localized as well. The painting has more coherence and more drama.
Example 17.

Example 18 shows a painting with a more complicated sky than Example 19. It is the same painting, just an earlier version. Here, the sky is too complicated and misses a single dominant area of light to attract our attention. The upper sky offers a large “U” shape of light directing attention toward the horizon but, another wedge of light lies along the horizon. There is too much confusion for a powerful drama to occur. By minimizing the light above into a much smaller single angled area. Next, I place the light on the horizon inside an elongated triangular wedge which includes both the sky and the landscape below it. Now, I have increased the sensation of space and drama (seen in Example 19).
Example 18. Before consolidation of the light into a singular wedge:






Patricia Scanlan
Thank you David. These examples are so interesting and I will have to try to use this concept. Happy New Year – I will see you in January.
Lorraine
Another outstanding demo/lesson.
elaine
ohh my God David so much information on New Years Eve my brain is crackinghave a happy new years see you next week
Gail Ingis
Thanks David. I “like your Post.” Your conversation here is wonderful as always. The best is your opening, “good against evil, light against dark. Finding the light is our quest. Light is the life-giver.” Your samples speak for themselves. Of course, opposites are critical. You can’t have light w/o dark and the variation of values. The ying/yang, the push/pull. This reminds me of the movie “Pretty Woman.” Have you seen it? Vivian (Julia Roberts) as the woman, a hooker, who knew nothing about fashion becomes a fashion plate, similar to “My Fair Lady.” the uncouth woman becomes the cultured stunning woman. Cinderella!
Roger Brown
Yet another fine chapter in your book to be! I marvel at your ability to identify a problem, isolate and explain it and leave us informed (and stronger) with a quick bit of brush work. Very thoughtful and much appreciated. Best Regards and Season’s Greetings. Roger
Jennifer Richard-Morrow
Very interesting!! Thanks & best wishes for the New Year!
William Child
Great entry for a new year, seeking the light, knowing it is enhanced by the contrast with darkened areas, shadowed content.
“A dark and stormy setting is perfect for magnifying the value of light.” David Dunlop
So true and love the way you help artists look and see and better understand tools of vision and composition for a better work. Of course I love the inclusion of examples 3 and 4 , Turner originals, exceptional studies in light and dark.
Interesting that as I quickly scanned the other examples I liked you original examples 15 and 18 a lot. Then learned you thought they need more to be better with new examples for each. I like the way example 15 makes you focus on the land and the other on the sky. The complexity of one making the mind’s eye seek the simpler I guess.
Anyway, you are so great to help us look and think about how we construct our compositions and knowledge is king, and after learning many possibilities, when we eventually do our own works, these helpful lessons can only help in improving the end product.
Paul Filipowicz
Thanks David,
Seeking the light is always something for us to strive for.
Happy New Year,
Paul
Fredric Neuwirth
Example 19 is stronger, simpler and more dramatic than the previous examples. It does take a while to see the tilted triangular shapes. It is subtle but very powerful. It is truly amazing what we do not see until it gets pointed out.
Have a great New Year!
peter rossi
Sent our Tid_Bits (your article didactque) to HackensackArt Club and the Fortlee Artist Guild. I have received more accolades from our members than ever before.
Hopefully, they will now paint the truth instead of pictures.